标题: I Don't Miss U That Much [打印本页] 作者: 香雪海小妖 时间: 2010-7-8 22:47 标题: I Don't Miss U That Much 本帖最后由 香雪海小妖 于 2010-7-8 22:49 编辑
I don’t miss you that much.
I just want to know if you are full when I am eating.
I don’t miss you that much.
I am just worried if you are warm when it’s cold.
I don’t miss you that much.
I am just anxcious if you are asleep when I go to bed.
I don’t miss you that much.
I just keep the phone close to me to see your message
at the first moment.
I don’t miss you that much.
I am just eager to share with you the funny things
the first moment I hear them.
I don’t miss you that much.
I just expect to get comfort from you
the first moment I am in blue.
I don’t miss you that much.
I just remember your smile every now and then.
I don’t miss you that much.
I just concern if you are happy at the moment.
I don’t miss you that much.
I just wonder if you just miss me as I do.作者: jocelynxu 时间: 2010-7-26 11:10
It seems like a ballad rather than a poem. But it is potential for the writer to excavate deeper sense from the narration so that words will tell richer stories for the readers.