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I Don't Miss U That Much

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发表于 2010-7-8 22:47 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 香雪海小妖 于 2010-7-8 22:49 编辑

I don’t miss you that much.
  I just want to know if you are full when I am eating.
I don’t miss you that much.
  I am just worried if you are warm when it’s cold.
I don’t miss you that much.
  I am just anxcious if you are asleep when I go to bed.


  
I don’t miss you that much.
I just keep the phone close to me to see your message
  at the first moment.
I don’t miss you that much.
  I am just eager to share with you the funny things
  the first moment I hear them.
I don’t miss you that much.
  I just expect to get comfort from you
  the first moment I am in blue.

  
I don’t miss you that much.
  I just remember your smile every now and then.
I don’t miss you that much.
  I just concern if you are happy at the moment.
I don’t miss you that much.
  I just wonder if you just miss me as I do.
简简单单就是幸福。。。

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发表于 2010-7-26 11:10 | 只看该作者
It seems like a ballad rather than a poem. But it is potential for the writer to excavate deeper sense from the narration so that words will tell richer stories for the readers.
Vouloir, c'est pouvoir.
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