拙译莎士比亚十四行诗第1首，见教见教！

keatslover

稍有疑问：吞噬大地而言，是由你和坟墓，比较费解，原句的意思大概是You purpose to be such a glutton as to consume both what the world and you yourself should have as a right.还有柴火和欲火有翻译过了的感觉。

[ 本帖最后由 keatslover 于 2008-4-5 17:43 编辑 ]