Fair maid and unfortunate old man

桑林

[Fair maid and unfortunate old man ]由冯文淑------桑林作于2006，3，24，

Thunder and lighting ,Enter fair maid

Fair maid sing，

You deep sea ,
Be you tears wet ？
Why ,why, why,should you tears wet ？
Why ,why, why,should you big in calmour？
O,since I was woman ,such roarings of tear rain,
From the sea,such groans of sorrow wind ,from the sea,
Such sheets of fire ,from the sea,
Such bursts of horrid thunder ,from the sea,
Such groans and roarings sea ,
I never remember to ha have heard.
O,sea'sorrow so ,as burst heaven ,
Crack earth ,
Sea' woeful break'ld man'nature,
O,break my heart poor sea,
Why,why,why,should you tears wet？
O,break, break, my break ,
For your woeful break 'ld iron， stakes，
Your woeful is lion ,now, lion break my heart,
My heart break .
When sorrow winds blow the sea' red woeful
Into the rocks ,instant,ture rocks to tear springs,
When sorrow winds blow the sea' red woeful
Into blue stars ,instant, turn blue stars to the tear springs ,
When sorrow winds blow the sea' red woeful
Into volclas ,change volclas with
Tear fountains ,instant,
When sorrow winds blow the sea' red woeful ,
Over the hill,sea'tears instant on mine own clothes.
Why, why,why,you so woeful, so woeful？
you deep sea .


Enter unfortunate old man

Thunder,lighting and sorrow wingds still,

unfortunate old man sing,

mu

语法问题...比较严重...但是意境不错！能用英语作诗勇气可嘉哦！

小香可

好像没完

桑林

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3/27/2006 2:10:00 AM
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