A Cool Autumn Night

jocelynxu

One brand-new night, the sky
Was veiled in black without
The moon or stars inset,
And the road reflecting the dim light,
Leaving trees shining in green and bright.

This was a classical painting of night
Composing of dynamic characters
And the static pure scene.

Riding around the holy palace;
Listening to lovely schoolmates’ talks;
Breathing a fresh breath in depth;
Indulging myself into the scenery enjoyment;
Singing an excited song for all.

This was a cool autumn night in early September,
On the novel campus I haven’t been ever,
The memorable feeling engraved forever.

北溟之鸟

能给个翻译吗?

jocelynxu

这个提议蛮好的.但有时灵感上来就用English写了,也许翻成中文并不能够表达,以上只是我个人的愚见。

[ 本帖最后由 jocelynxu 于 2006-9-13 07:59 PM 编辑 ]

kokho

这看到了，一个汉文的思考，写出来的英文诗。。。

(Allow me to demonstrate...)

请看连接

http://www.reeds.com.cn/viewthre ... a=page%3D1#pid47225

:)) 我把你想说的给诗化了。。。
拿给你的英文老师看看，你就会明白的。

[ 本帖最后由 kokho 于 2006-9-21 02:30 PM 编辑 ]

kokho

http://www.reeds.com.cn/viewthre ... &extra=page%3D1